This link has an AI generated podcast by Adobe Acrobat. the page will open my book in full which can be spoken. to see the podcast click the podcast tag at the left side of the page
It has taken my book called Cargelligowetlands Riverlung and analysed it and given a critique in the form of a podcast between two people.
It is an impressive critique so impressive in its accuracy.
I am using it as a promotion for the book. It has an accuracy about the content that has given me a confidence about my writing..
I had written this book 6 years ago( AI wasnt in existince) and had no real success in promoting it.
I Had published it as a hardcover and an e-book with apple books .
With this critique from my fictitious couple who voiced the podcast I have been given a new life into its worth and intend to promote it by whatever means I find possible..
The above poem by Eddie Vagg and the link underneath takes you through the story of his years of writing in sympathy with the demise of the Lachlan Valley and it’s wetlands. If you read the podcasts on the link, you will get an insight into the book that in hard copy and an ebook: Cargelligowetlands the Lachlan’s Riverlung with complimens to Adobe IA. Copies are available on his website CargelligoWetlands Lachlanriverlung.com.
This poem was written and recited about 2013. It was posted to YouTube at that time. It can be found under my YouTube name Edvagg
We are all on the blunder bus.
All brandishing a blunderbuss a blunderbuss. Blowing out our brains to the strains of "We shall overcome" There's a blunderbuss of regulations
Coming from nervous nations Be aware, cosmic care Is there The force that sets the course The unconscious cosmic influence Surges through humanity. Devoid of vanity Everybody cheers the blundering bus.
There's very few jeers for the blundering bus Science drives the blundering bus Its an atomic powered blunderbuss Not the gun-powdered one of old Ignorance is onboard the blundering bus Parliamentary Acts are a blunderbuss of regulations They're coming from nervous nations All designed to deploy and destroy opponents that annoy Don't despair, cosmic care Is there. The force that sets the course The unconscious cosmic course Surging through humanity. Devoid of vanity Sages throughout the ages have written and still do With this power of intuition often thought taboo, pages and pages of music and verse From their pen to you Steering us from the god of reason Throughout every season.
Here, from my pen to you
without further ado:
I'm cold in this cocoon of warmth. I'm deflated in this pumped up world. I'm not worshipping the god of reason I'm considered unreasonable. I'm looking in a cave but finding no monsters. I'm looking to the mountains and see no gods. The ancient spirits have abandoned us disbelievers. No ancient altars of sacrifice to appease the gods. But there are sacrifices. With a stroke of a pen more powerful than a bolt of lightning a rainforest is sacrificed to the god of reason.
There's no native gods to pull us into line. To smote us with plagues. To point the bone at our unearthly throne. They have been disposed of Dispossessed. Dismissed from their custodial duties. There's great fears for the land they nurtured well The land despairs Rainfall repairs.
With the Gods gifts of bounteous rain What do we do? Inflict more pain What do we do? Gain more gain For the gravy train Its reasonable to run with the gods gifts Its reasonable to run down rangelands Its reasonable to run with excesses Run a race horse Run off to the races Rearrange your faces Run off the rails
Now, out of their twiggy forest pop holes. Comes the afflicted addicted depicted as lost souls The God of reason,* our new mythical monster In the form of a blind mole surges forth Emerges from the Underground it haunts Usurps these lost souls primitive urges And begins its scourges . Like gaunt emaciated sheep they are sacrificed Captured for the chop Drained of every drop of godliness Resort to splurges depraved urges. Reasonableness resurges No hunt, no hounds. Nature is outward bound In the automated towns. Insulated from the dust storms, norms as the earth warms.
Anarchy abounds in the surrounds. Those with compassion are lashed for a lash'n, leaded or beheaded. Their captors kill at will to satisfy an ill -gotten notion that they are the chosen ones with guns. The appointed, anointed sons of reason Commandos commanding in the killing season.
Holy cow! Stop it now! Bond yourself with the benevolent gods. Reconnect with their world, the sod. They're not unreachable. They're are unpreachable. I implore. Adore Restore Their sanctuary, the savannahs, the woodlands, the rivers And the oh so twiggy forests and Twiggy Forrest's plan for unemployed man** The plan, to have everyone work again with dignity. No mentally degraded. No poor bastard parading jaded In prisons yard. Hard drugs Too hard No poor unfortunate.
The Mythical monsters of old who once kept civilisation from shitting in its own nest, are no more. They have been kicked out the door. But we have created a new one. The devils son
The new Mythic God of Reason conquers nature. Changes the season. Extinguishes species. Lives in its own fecies. And ohhh Brother, rapes its own mother. To man its a mental menace. Drugs his panacea. Its menacing, Subjugating, Subordinating and decimating Mother Earth for all its worth. She has taken a stance, Led us on a merry dance. Thrown her humans out of tilter. They smoke with no filter, Create strife. Live life as if there's no tomorrow, Borrow From the future. If you stand in the way of their loot they'll shoot ya.68 Why, why Do the non humans cry? " human nature we hate ya." Well. we have placed ourselves above them,
We don't love them. We have bared the plains And stopped the rains. No more do our rivers deliver The life giver water as they orta. Flood plain gums we plunder. Their death cracks like thunder. Startles the cockatoo community, Trying to maintain its unity, While we march on seemingly free of impunity. But. We are not so, see, the cracks are starting to show. Watch the wind blow, Desiccating the treeless land, Shifting sand, Temperatures climbing, Species declining. Now the first living thing Throws its hat in the ring. The simple cell Is giving us hell, Bacteria and virus Defy us. Think you can kill us with your chemical stew says Giardia the harder ya try The more we defy. We are one with nature, not one above With no love. She is vulnerable. But when push come to shove, She has a winner They eat us for dinner. The virus Defy us She has these little ones, They have big guns, Fighting on a hidden front A guerrilla stunt. They are winning, Thinning Us. Multiple resistance Ensures their persistence. They frustrate those who think they can dominate, Annihilate. Panicky people are just as liable To re-interperate the bible. The lord told moses on the mountain With the mob below idolising. Take this tablet and you will be on the path to ecstasy.
The bibles been skewed. The message has been misconstrued With modern man As it can. Now we are taking ecstasy tablets, This wandering, aimless lost band still idolising.
Reference: **Article by Jared Owens in the Australian 31st July 2014 "Twiggy Forrest plan" * Youtube clip "Approaching the unconscious" by C.arl Yung
Wow I got hold of this book. An amazing library of poems and prose.
Salvaged them from the wreckage of the Anthropogenic Era error. From the black box of the wreckage. Out in barren back blocks of the scorched continent. Got them. Now. Hurry, last rocket to the moon space port. Smuggled the box recording through. The alien custom officials. cajoled, bought. Now. Much to do Think outside the box , I’ve landed on the dark side of the moon No radio signals just dust and rocks Tucked up in my life support cocoon. I’ll go to work soon I’m in the dark as to what approach . Exposing this. I could be liable. Nah, not a subject I have to broach I swear on the bible. They are for humanity’s clawback, got to be told. So here I go, bold